Rating the Heroes of the Semester

Odysseus – 6/10

A surprisingly low score for the most famous literary hero of all time, I know. I have to admit, Odysseus wasn’t my favorite hero – but perhaps that’s what Emily Wilson intended by making him a “complicated man” (instead of a more obvious hero). Our Odysseus is somewhat brash and self-indulgent, his fatal flaw of hubris obvious to the eye (at least in this translation). While I enjoy his cleverness and courage, I’m a little bit less impressed by his half-inability to overcome this fatal flaw. I’d argue that the supposed character shift he experiences at the end (deciding not to attack the townspeople) is all engineered by Athena, as she’s the one who stops Odysseus from attacking and ties up his story in a nice little bow. While I like Odysseus, I can’t help but think that his character (as a hero) is a little bit static. He goes through all the motions of a typical hero’s journey, but his inner self remains largely unchanged – and it is for this reason that I have to give him a 6 out of 10.


Anse(???) – -23/10
Cash(???) – 6.5/10

I really can’t tell who the hero of As I Lay Dying is. Most of the characters’ journeys follow a twisted version of the typical hero’s journey structure (everyone has a reason to get to town, everyone encounters obstacles, et cetera, et cetera.) The only characters who seem to finish their arc in a somewhat happy way (for them) are Anse, who gets a new wife, and Cash, who becomes narrator. (As a review of what happens to the others – Darl gets arrested, Dewey Dell never gets her abortive tonic, Jewel loses his horse, and Vardaman eats a banana.)
I’d rate Anse a -23 out of 10. He’s just a terrible human being – he causes Cash’s amputation, steals Dewey Dell’s money and Jewel’s horse, and still claims that he takes care of his own. To add insult to injury, he struts out of town with a new wife (after going to all that trouble to bury Addie, claiming that it was all for love). I was willing to see him as an untwisted hero in the beginning (maybe his journey is about radically changing towards heroism?), but I lost patience with Anse long before they even got to town. Maybe his hero’s journey is fulfilled, but stealing his kids’ livelihoods isn’t a lifestyle anyone should look up to.
Cash, on the other hand, is a pretty solid guy, especially in comparison to all the weirdos around him. He’s a hard worker (in stark contrast to Anse), nobly stoic, and isn’t a burden on those around him. He doesn’t complain – even in his own narration – when he loses his leg, and eventually matures to a philosophical, almost-Darl like narrative style. I only gave him a lower score because I’m not sure he’s quite the hero of the novel. While he certainly could be a hero, his arc is largely separate from the lives of his family, and he plays a less influential part than Anse (or even Darl) does.


Grant 7/10
Jefferson 15/10

I think there are arguably two heroes in A Lesson Before Dying. Grant, our narrator, is given a hero’s journey to finish (teach Jefferson how to die, and teach the quarter’s children how to live) that he does not quite finish. While he does teach Jefferson to some extent, I’d argue that Jefferson eventually grows above him in having to be Grant’s hero, thus softening the effect of Grant’s own heroism. Grant also fails to be with Jefferson in his last hour, and his teaching style towards his younger students remains mostly static. While Grant is definitely on his way toward being a true hero for the quarter, he’s not quite there at the end of the novel, which is why I have to dock three points from his score.
Jefferson, on the other hand – what do I even say about Jefferson? He’s just grown so much through the length of the novel, and I’m sure his touching and brave diary entries made everyone tear up a little. He’s gone from seeing himself as a hog to becoming the hero for his community, carrying their crosses and breaking the white man’s myth through his incredible courage in death. He’s learned not only how to live and die, but how to love his quarter, and the noble emotion behind his death is overwhelmingly heroic. Jefferson is an amazing hero, and certainly my favorite hero in this list.


Jack 9.5/10

Well, everybody loves Jack. How could we not? He’s so smart and brave and the light of Ma’s life. The relationship between Jack and Ma is just heartwarming, and he is undoubtedly one of the most fearless heroes we’ve read this semester.
I only took away half a point because of how he went through his “refusal of the call”, and how desperate Ma seemed to get at his response. While I completely understand not wanting to go through with a plan (Jack was a trooper during that part), Jack just dismissing Ma’s clearly emotional stories was a harder pill to swallow. When Ma starts telling him about her past life outside, he only responds with “nah” and “no way Jose”, even as she’s clearly becoming distressed. That incident is the reason that Jack’s not a perfect ten – besides his initial disregard for Ma’s past, the bond between them is undeniable.


Macon – ?/10

I really don’t know how I feel about Macon – I think I’ll have to read the book over again to truly decide. My feelings towards Macon are either “okay, good point” or “what is he doing?” At times (usually in the beginning of the book), he’s able to speak sensibly (or even enlighteningly) about race. What he says to the crowd after being bailed out of jail is surprisingly self-aware and highlights a lot of the unacknowledged parts of casual racism. Macon, however, has always made me uncomfortable with his whole “I know better than everyone, even the black people” rhetoric. That whole thing with the Black Student Union at the beginning of the book and the fiasco Day of Apology highlight Macon’s unwillingness to listen, and that doesn’t sit right with me.



Comments

  1. I largely agree with this ranking, though I would say Odysseus' physical prowess would put him at around a 7, though maybe a 6.5 given just how self-centered he is. He's someone you could (probably) rely on in an ordeal (if he doesn't sacrifice you for himself), but maybe not the best person to hang out with.

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  2. I'd rate Macon a 5 or 6 out of 10. He's got some nice and valid points on casual racism, but he's too confident in himself and his words, and stuff... gets out of hand pretty quickly.

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  3. I really love your idea for ranking the heroes throughout the semester. All of them were complex and hard to really put into a clear mold of a hero. I also don't really now how to feel about Macon. He makes some good points, but parts of his character kind of make him ehhhh.

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  4. Ooh, this is a cool concept for a blog post. I totally agree with your ranking, especially Odysseus (a true 6/10), Jack (9.5/10 is pretty accurate), and Anse (-23/10 is what he deserves). The only one I would contest is Cash’s 6/10, because honestly, my boy Cash deserves only the best, he is such a sweet lad that gets so screwed over by his family. And he’s so sentimental about Ma, and such a hard worker and hero throughout the whole journey. At least a 9/10 in my heart.

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  5. Nice post! I totally agree with your ranking for Jack, Anse, and Jefferson and I also find Macon quite morally ambiguous and would find him really difficult to rank. Personally though, I would rank Odysseus lower. Most of his success is due to Athena guiding him and he also doesn't seem to develop emotionally very much over the course of his journey. The thing that seals the deal for my dislike of him though is his bloodthirsty-ness and the joy he takes in ambushing and brutally murdering all the suitors. I'd give him 0.2/10.

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  6. Good ranking system! I might have put Cash a few points higher but all of these values seem correct. I do think that a lot of the heroes in these books are complicated heroes that are not always worth of being called such. More like "protagonist" if you ask me. Having most of them around 6/10 makes sense.

    Anse should be more like -213 though.

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  7. Honestly? Still not over Anse's shit. That last reading sent me spinning. All for a new wife??!!?!?!! What a dick. Hate him.
    But also, Jack deserves that 10/10. I don't care what you think of his refusal, he's five years old. Room is all he's known, and Outside terrifies him. It's completely understandable that he wouldn't want to listen to Ma's story. I also think he doesn't want to hear about how Ma has been treated badly in the past. It's hard for a five-year-old to be interested in a fair amount of things anyway.

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  8. Nice post, however, I think that it's totally unfair to take away that half a point away from Jack for his refusal of the Heroes Call. I mean cmon, if you were 5 years old, living comfortably in your house, and I told you to go risk it all for something you don't even know about, I don't think you would easily agree to it, nor would I, nor would anyone whose sane. Yes Ma had an intense emotional reaction, but we saw that lots of times, Jack doesn't even understand emotions all that well while he was in the room.

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  9. I like that you point out that your opinion on Odysseus may have been influenced specifically by Emily Wilson's translation. I agree that he seems kind of static, though I really can't get over the fact that his masculinity isn't portrayed as threatened by his emotional vulnerability throughout the book. I also agree with the ambiguity of Macon's hero status as well as the specific hero of As I Lay Dying. However, I do think that Jack and Jefferson were the ones deserving of the perfect score, partially for how easy it is to love their characters, but also becuase I think we see some of the most "hero" and brave character development from them, particularly given their specific situations that were somewhat forced upon them.

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